[quote=@Monochromatic Rainbow]
Alright posted. Hopefully I didn't mess up anything obvious, I'm not too familiar with the jargon and how to yell orders in a proper Operator-As-Fuck fashion. 
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You did fine! The only thing in all these posts that really threw me off was when [@ChaoticFox] said "Ten-Four." While it is a code for acknowledgement, I believe it is only used in police fire rescue, and ambulance. I don't know for sure, however, I've just never heard of any military using ten four as an acknowledgement. I have no problem with it, mind you, just something I saw.

As for my post, I shold be able to work on it before the weekend. Was kind of a bad week for me to start an RP,  but I should be fine afterwards