[quote=DeathstrokeSW] Name: Jason [last name undecided]Hero/Villain name: [undecided, help appreciated]Age: 17Race: HumanAlias: NoneAppearance: Brown hair, green eye(one's missing) 6' 170. Wears a gray tactical vest, no sleeves, nothing on his arms. black camouflage pants, black combat boots, and a mask that covers the lower half of his face. Has a tattoo of a black and grey dragon on the back of his shoulderPowers: noneSkills: assassination, expert hand to hand combat, torture. Expert weapon masterWeapons: none. He improvises weapons as necessary.Gear:Personality: cold, and dark. He bears scars on 40% of his body. Distrustful of others, doesn't hesitate to killBackground: Much of Jason's history is unknown. What is known is that at age 10, he was made an orphan, and taken in by a group of assassins who passed down their techniques to him. Could join the titans. [/quote] Take no offence... but don't think this should be accepted because it seems very unfinished... Instead of assassination, you could describe what stealth form he uses... instead of hand to hand expert, describe his known martial arts or his fighting style... same goes for weapons expert... what weapons does he know? If he's improving his weapons as necessary than he should have weapons to improve to begin with, right? Same would go with his gear. Finally is his Personality and History... If possible you should try and improve on that a bit. If you need help with making your CS I'll be glad to help dude. Just hit me, Chev, or Stry a PM and we'll help whenever we can. :) We also have most of your past CSs as well and well be PMing everyone each individual CS that each player owned as soon as we possibly can.