[@Akayaofthemoon] I already knew most of what your character had going since I already saw it. Very nice. Just one little thing: the personality is a little lacking in details. If you can give us a deeper look into who she is, how she views the world, faunus, why she's a huntress, anything to help us know her more, that would be great. 

Also, I had a great idea for the Form 3 or her weapon! 

Why not have the 6 inner blades of the fan be able to shoot out? The can be attached to wire like Penny's swords and thus easily retract back into the sword. I think that would be really cool!

But yeah, once your personality is edited a bit, I will accept her. Let me know when you finish.