[@jordy0403]

More improved strength with no context for what that strength can accomplish. I cannot hold this against you as I still even after bringing it up before still have not defined what my two characters can do with their super strength. Its just pretty prevalent across all the characters and undefined i every case. Again not actually something I can hold against the character. It says healing. Is this the ability to cast something like healing spells or a healing factor kind of thing to let him recover from his own wounds faster? 

The backstory leaves me a little confused. Why is what his mother said on her deathbed important? Why did he run away from his foster family exactly? I mean there's plenty of reasons one can come up with, but as it is I am just left to assume that it vaguely has to do with not being loved enough by them or something. Why the second closest village and not the first closest village? His personality makes it seem like Jinx is actually a pretty okay guy. Why did he have such trouble accepting goodness especially given his angel blood? Finally I am not sure the significance of Jinx being half angel besides that it gives him cool powers. And I guess that's fine. I mean why does anyone choose any inspiration for a character? Cool powers is probably up there. That said an angel, a being of pure light, making it into this world and inseminating a woman is kinda a big deal to this world as it kinda breaks the rules. They aren't supposed to be here. Doesn't mean they can't. Demons have done far worse to the balance of the world. Or at least Nyarlathotep has. And because its a big deal to the world I would kinda hope that it would be important to their son as well.

You don't need to address everything, but these are the questions I have after reading the bio.

[@Legion02]

I need to bug Avanhelsing. I assume that's what was hold Leslie up before this weekend.

[@Cubix]

Forgot to answer your question about breakfast. I want to have at least one go around again and probably dole out a sort of punishment to Rida. We can probably hand wave the rest after that. Since permission has been given to use Lucinda for now I might get a post in for the king and queen later, but I am worried about doing Lucinda justice.