Alrighty. I don't like to complain, but I really have to bring up [@yoshua171]'s character. 

- He has a ring that he always knows the location of and that protects him from magic. Okay, sure.
- He has an amulet with someone's soul in it that improves his focus, and presumably thus all of his powers, "twentyfold." O-kay. 
- He has a sword where just unsheathing it causes everyone nearby to kill themselves by starvation.
- He can read people's emotions.
- He can summon, and to an extent mind-control, demons (and, uh, gods?)
- He can magically bind himself to wandering spirits and force them to do his bidding.
- He can, apparently, shatter peoples' minds and souls and absorb them into himself.

Doesn't that seem a bit excessive? Not to mention his backstory, which comes across as incredibly edgy -- for some reason his village reacts to finding out a child is blind by abandoning them in the woods, and then bringing out an executioner to kill him when he returns. Then the executioner just magically falls to the ground, the sword goes flying through the air and kills the town leader. Seeing this, the townspeople let your character live with them for five years. He wanders to the coast, takes a convenient fishing boat to wander the lands, and stumbles upon a temple full of wise men who teach him how to harness his magic. Then a mysterious hooded stranger tells him to seek out people to kill a demon, so he travels along, doing "good" that isn't elaborated on but also killing entire villages when people make him angry. Then he meets up with people, gets a bunch of overpowered gear and kills a demon.

I just find it hard to believe that this guy would ever be known as a mythical hero.