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I offered to write a summary, Raven just said either remove the titles and call it some name similar to soul magic or whatnot. I called it Invocation as that is the form of the magic, kept the titles, and put it in a hider titled as the aforementioned. Seeing as he has accepted that, it must be alright.

I went into specifics to avoid his abilities being pegged as "powerful with no weaknesses". I accept your criticism, but I don't think I'll be rewriting those abilities. The closest I may do is write a summary.
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You're literally telling me, "I see what's wrong, and I was even told to change it by the GM, but I'm still not going to do anything about it."

I'll take the point for the mind rending, though this doesn't explain why he was able to use it so frequently in the past. Still no weakness for the sword, nor explanation for his backstory.