[@Arista] Yeah, s'not that it's bad, it's just the way it gives information is a little more tell than show, and it feels like pieces of information are missing, or skipped over. For instance, "this new family," being mentioned seemed really out of place considering the paragraph prior you'd simply called them newcomers and didn't give much information regarding what they were. To me, it felt like it was supposed to be more than three people with the verbage used.