[@agentmanatee] Looks good so far. The only nitpick I have to make is one one of his weaknesses -- as a knight, Jon almost certainly wouldn't be expected to have any archery skills, so it doesn't quite count as a drawback. Regardless, you've got plenty of more valid ones.

The court's general opinion on Jon will no doubt be determined by the people playing him, but I imagine that the lord and lady might be a bit miffed that they lost a potential marriage alliance to a hedge knight.