[quote=@gravity22] Lemme know what y'all think of Addie, I'm pretty new to play-by-post. So feel free to call me out on my crap. [/quote] You're slipping between first and third person sometimes, I've noticed. Different communities have different preferences, but they generally don't care as long as you stick to one or the other. But yeah, everyone's been there at one point or another. Generally just be willing to offer/accept feedback and you'll probably do fine. Like writing anything else, it's a learning experience that never really ends, but you'll probably end up great at it in no time. If you're ever unsure if you're doing something right, skimming through guides like [url=http://forumroleplay.com/roleplay-guides/]this one[/url] can help out a lot, and if that doesn't help, always feel free to ask your fellow RPers. [quote=@Tracyarmav] [@gravity22][@lavulman][@bobert778] you three are approved and can move your CS's to the characters tab. Then feel free to jump into the IC. [/quote] Sure thing. I'll probably wait for Bobert, though. Hopefully he can post later tonight. In the meantime, I'm tired as hell. Oh, and [@mewgirl99]? I can't really say I've known you for long or at all, but it looks like you're going through a rough patch. I don't know how rough it is, or how long it'll last, and I'm kind of shitty at offering advice, but in those kinds of situations I've always tried to remember to stay smart, stay strong, and stay beautiful, especially on the inside. Things always get better eventually, and once you start thinking that they won't, it can be hard to pick yourself back up, especially if you've convinced yourself that there's no one out there who will stop and offer you a shoulder to lean on.