[quote=Kaalee][/quote] Hello! We're always happy to have new faces join us~! There's a few things about your profile that need to be gone over, though. o1 . As an angel, she's going to be less inclined to violence - they will fight for justice, but will not be violent without provocation. That would be a sin, and result in falling from grace. o2 . Technically, even if she didn't want the throne, she wouldn't be able to refuse it without a strong argument against the title. What would her argument be? o3 . Her biography is too short, and needs to be expanded on. There's no background or personality explained. So perhaps expand using the second point? o4 . This is a smaller thing, but she doesn't have a surname. Michael's royal family has the surname of Zaphiris. I discussed these things with Touhoure - since we're co-GMing - and we'd love to see what you can do with Kyalia. c: