[@HellishWaffle] Your fine.

[@OppositionJ] It looks good, but the only think that sets me off a bit is that it seems Aeterna is at least a decent industrial power, with access to a great amount of Edoniras military invetions. While I am fine with you playing a nation in Hadricia, if you are, I want your industrial and military power to be limited for a while. Besides that a extra one or two paragraphs in history would be nice. Otherwise, everything else looks fine.

If anyone else if finished or would like my thoughts so far, shoot me a poke and I will get on it.