I've considered giving constructive criticism on entries, but I'm going to hold back because I hardly think advice from the contest creator is fair XD

I'll be reading over your entries later (except those unfinished) and ensuring they meet specifications. That's the only criticism I'll give you, I don't want you to get disqualified due to something unclear in my rules.

A detail you can add (as Forsythe already has) is voice, if you want. I've got voice claims for both Amy and the daughter profile I've got half finished. I'm not going to really give extra for it but it might bring your character to life somewhat.