[@Heathen] Thank you for your patience, and willingness to make the edits. His weaknesses and drawbacks, and shizz are now up to my ridiculously high standards.

Only one thing I don't quite get,

[quote]Lastly, his powers are drawn from his own metahuman energy. If he phases too many people or phases into a super dense object, he will pass out or die depending on how much energy he used.[/quote]

I kinda feel like something power-related should occur if his power draws upon his energy. Like losing his powers for a bit, it fritzing, or having a higher chance of ashing. That's just me. lol


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[@Shikaru] Power section is fine, the other thing I should note is that you didn't describe enough of her appearance for me to get a clear picture. You forgot stuff like hair color, facial-shape, etc. That's pretty much it.


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Three pages and I'm already exhausted.