Finished my CS, tell me if there's anything wrong with it. [hider=Andreas Galen] [h2]CS Template[/h2] [center][color=green]Andreas Galen[/color] “Machine mind, human ingenuity.” -Andreas Galen [/center] [hr][hr] [center][color=green]T H E B A S I C S [/color] [color=green]|Name|[/color] Andreas Galen [color=green]|Birth Date|[/color] June 3rd, 2357 [color=green]|Age|[/color] Approximately five months old, though appears to be in his late twenties. [color=green]|Species|[/color] Humanoid Android [color=green]|Gender|[/color] Male [/center] [hr][hr] [center][color=green]A P P E A R A N C E[/color] [img] http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/5/5b/KifarItran-SWBlog.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20131006204706[/img] [color=green]|In Depth Appearance|[/color] Andreas stands exactly six feet tall, he appears completely human on the outside. His frame is study and masculine, showing no flaws or irregularities. He has dark blonde hair, and keeps a clean shaven appearance. The android has curious brown eyes which often wander as he absorbs the sights around him. His clothing of choice is a dark grey jumpsuit, several pockets on it, on his feet he wears a comfortable pair of black boots. [color=green]|Scars, Tattoos, Piercings|[/color] N/A [/center] [hr][hr] [center][color=green]G E T T I N G T O K N O W M E [/color] [color=green]Job[/color] Medic [color=green]|Likes & Dislikes|[/color] ✔ Learning, any knowledge he can learn. ✔ Music, the type which stirs an emotional response. ✔ Helping people, whether that be through medical aid or other. ✔ Mind sports, chess is a favorite. ✘ Violence and death. ✘ Smoking, drinking and drugs. ✘ Intense arguments and extremely negative emotions. ✘ Abuse of animals. [color=green]|Habits|[/color] - Andreas does everything by the book, as he is programmed to. These ways are often the most direct ways. - He is non violent, programmed that way. Andreas has a strict refusal to attack an organic lifeform. If someone gets into a fight with him then he won't fight back. - As an android, he was programmed with a full range of emotions, but he does not understand them. He will often ask peculiar questions about human behaviors in an effort to understand and try to become more human like. [color=green]|Fears|[/color] ☠ Failing those he serves as a man of medicine. ☠ His ten year lifespan ending, he cannot comprehend it, as it was programmed when he was created. [/center] [hr][hr] [center][color=green]D E L V I N G D E E P E R[/color] [color=green]|Personality|[/color] ♦ Emotionally naive ♦ Straightforward ♦ Curious ♦ Good-natured ♦ Andreas is a positive thinking android, ones that genuinely cares about others. He treats everyone positively, even if they are the worst kind of scum. He's naive with his emotions in an innocent way. Whilst fully programmed with them he does not understand them fully, nor others. He understands people medically, but not emotionally. Subjects such as love and war are something he does not get. He's also fully aware of his status as an android, though does not know why some people treat him with prejudice because of it. He's straightforward in his methods and his words, often speaking bluntly with no ill intent. He wasn't programmed to lie, and when asked a question will tell the whole truth. He's an emotional being, able to feel both positive and negative emotions, as well as an almost childlike curiosity and a sense of self preservation. He currently goes by many of his programmed functions, though he is able to learn and change them, this includes his personality and emotions, as he could become more human. [color=green]|Place of Origin|[/color] Mars, Sol System, Terran Federation. [color=green]|History|[/color] Andreas was created on Mars, in a factory in the largest city on the world. He was an early model of his line of humanoid androids, impossible to tell from humans on the outside. He was named after two legendary medical figures in human history, designed as a doctor and a surgeon, capable of a wide range of functions. A complex mind with encyclopedic knowledge of the medical field able to perform high risk surgeries with machine level precision. He was sold off Mars a few days after creation to an independent buyer. The android was never meant to stay on Mars anyways, he was capable of working on any ship or world. Leaving Mars was a strange experience for Andreas, knowledge on space and all of the known worlds were implanted into him before creation, he just was not sure whether to feel sad about leaving his home, the world he was essentially born on. It would be the first of many questions he would ask himself. Andreas was told he was sold to the Sisters of Merci, he had never heard of them, but had been told they provided medical aid across the galaxy to those that desperately needed it. He greatly agreed with the statement, though he did not care for anything in the group other than providing medical aid. He landed on a colony world that had been ravaged by criminals, crime lords practically ran it, crushing the poor under their feet. His first sight of the world, at the beaten, abused masses that needed help saddened the android, he didn't understand why the poor people were hurt so badly by the criminals who ran the world, why no one stepped in to stop them. He spent several months on the world, administering aid to any and all he could. Andreas did good work, it was what he was programmed to do. Though his life would change after one encounter with a patient, one whose family had been butchered by the mob. A young girl, barely even an adult. Her legs had been broken severely by the mobsters, disfigured the more correct term. He was to remove the limbs and replace them with fully functioning synthetic parts. Andreas was tasked with giving her a medical checkup, though it would be much more than that as the disturbed woman killed herself before the android. He had exited the room for a moment to retrieve medicine, when he returned he found the window open, the woman's corpse in the street below. She had dragged herself out of the bed, to the window and leaped from it, all in the few minutes he had left the room. From his briefings and interactions with the girl he figured out that she had severe mental issues, though he never expected her to end her own life, he never knew why anyone would do that. He was relieved of his job after that, the Sisters of Merci horrified at the sight, many blaming him for it. He was given his freedom, though it was not something he wanted, nor was designed to receive. Unsure of where to go next, Andreas drifed for a short time, this was until he ended serving on a ship for the first time in his life. It was a new experience, but one he was eager for. 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