[@Shiny Keldeo] Yeah, suppose I could edit a few things around to try and make some things fit better and I always try to make my characters interesting in some capacity, thanks for the feedback.

Edit: I fixed it up a bit, hope that works a little better, probably not but my tired brain thinks anything looks good, hehe, I had written something else but I felt it was a little long and a lot of stuff in it wasn't needed, hopefully this is better as I said.