[@Cultural Titan] Shouldn't be much for you to quarrel about, it's only designed to add some flesh to the bone. However, you do have an eager eye for lore conflicts, so I can at least be confident that any mistakes on my part will be quickly detected and corrected. :)

I'll be contacting you over Oglaff soon, so that I don't end up breaking stuff.

Also, well done for that entry, from experience I know it's a bastard when you have to be in fifty places at once in one post.

[@IcePezz] Gorgeous post by the way, superb! Liara's flare really came through in that entry, I look forward to seeing what that gal can do.

[@Absolis] I love your writing style, it's very unique, but sometimes I get a bit confused. You use the word "would" alot, and whilst there's nothing wrong with that, it brings my brain to a halt sometimes lol. You know, I starting thinking "wait, so she hasn't done that yet? Oh, no she has, I think?" 

But don't change a thing, it works well once I get my head around the style :)