[quote=@Cultural Titan] [@Frengo] You are right about the your impression of the king, but he still came and the way it was written it sounds like he never came, which is different. Raven has been dead 20 yearsish because I wanted to tie it in with the previous king, but if peole think he should be more ancient then I can work with that. [/quote] That's okay dude, I'll have another crack at writing it. My apologies, I admit that I am not the best writer... I sorta just start typing and run with it, which can lead to inconsistencies and what not, and even proof-reading still leaves glaring errors. But hey, that's why I joined this forum, so that I could just f**k up relentlessly until I start improving :D ... just means you guys have to bare the brunt of my shenanigans. As for Raven, it's entirely up to you. Personally I think old undead = best undead, but maybe this RP needs a sexier, younger model.