[quote=@TheWindel] [@Lugubrious] So let me just say first that I extremely like your character. Also, accepted. Please place her into the Character Tab. On another note, expect a first IC post either late tonight or tomorrow everyone. [/quote] Thank you! I generally prefer the 'more is better than less' approach. I wanted to make a character that I knew I would enjoy playing as, one with a unique look and personality to interest myself and other players. Bad RPers make bland characters that they get bored of and then quit their RPs before they even really get going. I also wanted to put more effort into the backstory than none at all; even if the characters don't know the backstory, we as writers do and should, because humans are greatly defined by their experiences. IMO, mystery is all well and good, but a really cool veil won't entertain anyone if there's nothing behind it.