[quote=@Blue Demon]
[@Kokushi]Hey, Just wanted to let you know, lifting parts verbatim from my interest check isn't cool (Neither is changing a word or two here or there). This site is for writing and not plagiarizing other people's stuff. If you could fix that, I'd appreciate it very much.
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I've been working on it, I mostly did it for the outline of it, but I was passing out at my computer at the time, so nor worries dude. However next time, try a PM, less of an asshole move and tends to allow people to let you know "Hey I liked the outline, I'm working on editing the fuck out of it though"