[@Kraven] You can spread those two things out. It's basically like you're writing a book. Use your five senses and image like you're there for the first paragraph. And then for the second, be the person that's there: Crispy, fallen leaves crunched underneath her feet as she approached the seemingly silent cottage. The cold air nipped at her skin, causing goosebumps to rise up on her arms and neck. She shivered, pulling the only slightly warm coat around her tighter. The cabin that stood in front of her was creepy and dark, with cobwebs hanging in the corner and a small black cat statue sitting to the side of the dark wood door. Hands shaking, she reached up to knock on the door. "Hello?" she called, as the knock echoed through the house. She couldn't see anyone through the stained side windows. With the knock, the door had been knocked open and she pushed through it, entering without waiting for an answer. She stepped inside the cottage, tucking a strand of dark hair behind her ear as she went in. Her breath created clouds in the cold cabin and she quickly waved it away with a hand, clearing her vision. Something like that ^^. It gets one mainly with actions and another with mainly senses and feelings.