[@Bishop]

I am in no way the GM or co-GM so you do not have to listen to me at all, I just thought I'd offer some criticism. His personality and biography read a lot like a summary or hook of a book rather than a synopsis of who he is and why he is that way. Instead of talking about what will happen in the future, you should talk about his past and present.

Another thing is, even with his CS, I have no idea who he is. His personality is not explained very well and his past, like why he became a fallen angel, isn't very clear either. The only thing really being said is "I hate being controlled which is why I left heaven" over and over again in different ways.

Is he an optimist, pessimist, or a realist?
When he talks to someone, is he sarcastic, aloof, or friendly?
is he selfish or selfless?
Humble or arrogant? Maybe even insecure?

That's just my two cents. Ultimately, you don't have to listen to me and if you don't, I won't take it personally just as I hope you don't take this personally, either. (: