[@MonkeyBusiness] Okay, couple things 1) I would really like it if you could be a little more descriptive with the personality. Can you explain if they're all bad or there is some good in them? If you plan on having them evolve into a good guy, then I would suggest adding a little bit of good in there. 2) On the powers, will you make it to where something else remains the same besides the clothes? Like they can only transform into someone similar to their age or a specific species or something? It seems a little bit powerful to be the only thing unchanged is their clothes. 3) The Mages didn't send out letters, they met their people in person. That's a little tidbit in the biography that is a necessary to change. 4) This goes for both you and [@Bishop], since they have something down as well, when I mean [i]Title[/i], I mean are they Madam, Mister, Lord, Lady, Prince or Princess. It gives an early relation on whether they are related to the King or to Deegra. Besides that stuff, I think that it turned out really well! I really liked the backstory. :) --EDIT-- Another thing, I really like your name for your character. It's so simple and cool.