[@Apokalipse]
Sorry, I completely forgot that Elspeth was finished. 
Alright, so will you define in the biography what made her personality change so abruptly? Because it seems like a few things could have. In your personality, you stated that there was a life even when she was seven that made it change. Was it when she left Sabira or when her mother died or when she met the assassin? I would like that to be a little more... prominent I guess is the word. 

When you say counterfeit... do you mean like papers? Or just right out stating that she's someone she's not? That's in the skills portion... Besides that, everything looks alright.