[quote=@Satoshi Kyou] [@Xeiyenreisha] least its not as bad as being rejected from being on family photo's man i made Hayate's history too lonely [/quote] Well, I made changes toward Tsukiko's personality, because that one felt lazily written. If you read it now that is actually how she is. Like her brother has learned, that girl is complicated when it comes to understanding her. The last part I managed to catch myself and take it off where I took that to PM. Sorry about that, Ammokkx. If I do it and don't realize it just let me know.