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[@Apokalipse] Did I miss anything? Or is there anything you'd like to add, my lovely Co-GM?

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Just a reiteration of substance. What helps me is that, when you're writing don't think "is this enough?" but rather "does this aptly explain my character in some way?" If you write something, and it doesn't somehow contribute to the way your character acts the way they act, then it's not needed. Aka, ages in the bio. They are not one age, it is a summary of the important events in their life. Also, when writing a personality, you do not always have to use this, but I find it helps sometimes: the Japanese believe people have three faces (alone, with friends, public). It is how they act in these three situations and it helps setting the bulwark for a great personality paragraph. With bio, don't just write about adulthood. Write about birth, childhood, teenage-hood, and then the current situation they are in now.