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General Information

[B]Gender:[/b] female
[B]Title:[/b] dethroned princess
[B]Species:[/b] elf
[B]Alliance:[/b] dragonian

[B]Relationship Status:[/b] single
[B]Sexuality[/b]: asexual
[B]Partner[/b]: nope
[B]Siblings[/b]: one half-brother, a human swordsman by the name of "ketsueki kuchi"
[B]Others:[/b] a pretty lonely lone wolf

[B]Skills:[/b]she is both an arrowsmith and an archer, as well as being skilled with a silver tanto knife. she is a force to reckoned with on the battlefield. At home however, she is a gardener.

[B]Weaknesses[/b]: anything that can outrange her bow is a big threat, anyone who can use her slightly low self-esteem against her

[H1]Biography:[/h1]
born in to a family very low down in the hierarchy, evergreen was always looked down upon by everyone. She was the laughing stock of all the noble families and always the "peasant tree" or "that one rotting apple" and her personal favourite: "you there, move."
She was the daughter of a silversmith and a maid; which never gave her much hope in the fun game of "your mother sucks because:"; a childhood favourite of everyone except herself.
Her fortune turned when she entered the eleven school of woodland magic and fighting, when on a mandatory ambassador tour, the Prince noticed her and took a special liking to her, for her talent and looks. Suddenly she had become the big name, the adopted daughter of the king of elves.
But it all changed when the king was assassinated, and all the royal family were exiled from the treetops. Forever. She lived in the forest for many years; feeding on berries, honing her skills and fining out her fighting technique.
It was sheer luck; or maybe fate; that brought her upon the emerald green egg that held the spawn of a dragon.

[B]Dragon Color:[/b] green
[B]Dragon Name:[/b] guramu
[B]Dragon gender:[/b] male
[B]Description of Your Future Adult Dragon:[/b] vines cascading down his thickly scaled head, guramu's body will be a slim, hunters body with rippling muscles barely contained beneath his emerald hide. A harpoon tail as long as as the rest of his body will swerve around with deadly accuracy, puncturing whoever his mistress would ask him to.
Specific Dragon Powers:[list]
[*]Wilderness call: guramu calls a stampede of woodland creatures to his feet
[*]vine slam: the vines that make up guramu's "hair" will turn into snake-like whips and attack enemies
[*]jade flash: guramu breaths out an assault of green fire, burning everything foolish enough to stay around him for that long. Everything but the trees.[/list]
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ALL of those need to have capital letters at the beginning, for starters. Her weaknesses are not a full sentence. The sentence about her feeding on berries is grammatically incorrect. It's not just the grammar either that's wrong with your CS. You have barely any content as to who your character really is. I want character development, not just some sentences. Like why was the King assassinated? Why did her family hate her? Give me content. Don't just try and meet the minimum requirements and back out. Also, you didn't even meet my minimum requirements for a few of these. I don't want a three sentence paragraph that's hardly anything. I want more than three sentence paragraphs with deep content in them. Please, look at my CS or Apokalipse's. You can get some good ideas from them on what you're supposed to do. 

Also, your title is completely wrong! Elves had no king or queen, as the King was human. He ruled over [i]everyone[/i]. Your title would be "Madam", and your elf would not be a princess. This also makes your biography, technically in this timeline, historically incorrect.