[@bloonewb]
I know I'm not GM in this RP, but I'm gonna be blunt with you. That character sheet is just too short, too thin. Look at the rest of ours, compare the length, the detail, and so on. 

That character sheet of yours has a place in casual at best, if not "Free". I'm not the one who gives the final say, but to me that's just not good enough :/ Not for "Advanced".