[@Leos Klien] Your adjustments are as follows.

-Change the Volundreng copy to a generic Orc hammer.

-Smithing tournament; for someone who just picked the craft relatively recently, it's hard to imagine her beating professional smiths working their entire lives. Swap second place for fourth or below. Top five is still pretty impressive.

-She sends letters home, but have only quill and no paper. If this is what you intended, then I imagine Sylvanis must rip sheets out of her journal or buy paper locally. Either way, please put in a explanation.

-Two axes and a giant hammer is sure a lot of firepower (or orichalc power). First of all, reduce her backup weapon to just one. Secondly, I find it strange for her to fall back on a sharp weapon when she has zero blade skills. A smaller mace would work better.

-Racial power, like we discussed in PM. Exercising total control over animals is more game mechanics, it would only manifest if the said Bosmer had been honing their innate powers for their whole life, by following the Green Pact to the letter and staying true with their traditions. Sylvy does not fulfill these conditions, instead, her gift would be realized as greater degree of fear and respect from mundane creatures such as the wolf. 

-Personality; it feels like she drifts from drunken fights to sober fights, with little more than angry bouts in between. This is not good for her blood pressure. Nobody can be a hardass 24/7, tell us what she is like in her down time, beside drinking her brain out.

-I prefer a full line of spacing between paragraphs, and sentences of the same topics grouped into unified paragraphs instead of point forms. Go back and smooth it out, especially the later portion of her bio.
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[@MenageAUne] Two major changes before we get to the nitty-gritty.

-I've had a discussion with [@MiddleEarthRoze] earlier. Cathay-rahts are gigantic, they are said to be taller than Altmers. We're not doing a height measuring contest here. Just look at Sylvanis before you; 5 feet and still very deadly. Change her subspecies to regular Cathay and maybe chop down an inch or two.

-Recruits from the Reach are no longer accepted. Your character would be joining us in Windhelm, maybe Whiterun or Rorikstead while the company is on its way.