[quote=@Savato]
Review is in [color=ed1c24]red[/color] as always. 

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[@Blue Demon] Seems all good to me. C:

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I lol'ed so hard at this that my aunt looked at me as if I had three heads. 

I'm gonna get to work on that Kekkei Genkai, perhaps delete it and replace it with only a specific art of his as you suggest. Thanks a lot.