[@KazeXDZ]

Right, what's with the obscure monsters? You swap out a Crocotta for a Leprechaun? Why would you think that's any better? You don't need seven different species - in fact, the more species in a single group, the less likely I can see them working together in such a decent way that they manage to take out a family of seasoned hunters. Get rid of the Leprechaun, and don't even think about putting some other uncommon monster in there - just throw in another Djinn or Shapeshifter.

Ex-Military Mother I can deal with, but the Father as a weapon's smith? Creating guns like the ones you've listed? No, that's just a lazy-ass way of explaining how they got those ''super-cool video game'' guns. Not only is it extremely unlikely, but you still haven't explained why they would waste so much money on them, simply for aesthetic. Hunter's are [b]not[/b] rich people. I also want the sniper changed.

Speaking of richness, why do you insist on your car having a modified engine? How modified is it? Why is it modified? Why does it [b]need[/b] to be modified? Any modifications cost money, something that hunters don't have an abundance of.


Look, as stated in the OOC, I'm wanting some realism in this roleplay. Nobody cares about how flashy or high-tech your equipment is; it just needs to work well enough to kill monsters. Start putting some more thought in your character, please; this isn't some free roleplay where the guy with the biggest gun wins.