[quote=@Blue Demon]
So far I like it, especially how you justified it. Just two things I noticed right off hand.

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The rank is Commander and the position is Captain. Not the other way around. (And that's just me being a little nitpicky.)

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I've read this sentence a few times. And no matter that I know what it's supposed to say, I keep reading it as the Vulcan woman takes the newborn with her. But that's just me. 

I look forward to your finished CS.
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Fixed. I'll try to work on the post now, may not be that big.

[quote=@Kentsukan]
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I don't know why, but I get the sense that she and Catherine will bicker. 

I like it! :D
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Oh, yeah. Vash is not the typical breed of CO.  She will doubtlessly do/say/plot something that Catherine won't like that much. lol