[quote=@j8cob] My review is in [color=cyan]blue[/color]. [color=cyan]There are many problems that I have with this sheet. There are numerous grammatical errors and the coding of the sheet is subpar, making it visually unappealing to look at. Likewise there are several things that [i]need[/i] to be fixed. I do not approve of it as it stands right now. Fix the coding and make the required changes before I look at it again. I can guarantee Partisan or Savato will agree with my requested changes, so they will likely postpone reviewing until the changes are made.[/color] [/quote] That's...pretty nitpicky- Oh well, fair enough. Hope this RP turns out great none the less, it has a good plot and there's a lot of great roleplayers in this.