[@Dawnscroll] I have to admit, while your post is well written, I'm a little confused about what exactly is going on. I mean, the very first part... why on earth would there be Ironborn raiders on the riverbank if they're making a bolt for Torrhen's Square? Following that, how did the Ironborn Fleet of forty ships get magically reduced to twenty by the time they reached Torrhen's Square? And I mean, probably my main issue... you made the Ironborn fleet seem like a bunch of total amateurs. I mean, Ironborn longships are not small at all; they're 100 oars and stand up to Westerosi Galleys. The Ironborn raiders are renowned for their skills in ship-to-ship combat, they're talented and fearsome warriors - in your post you had a crew of Northmen cut through them like farmboys. 

I know that by this point this probably seems like I'm just picking holes in absolutely everything. I would like to clarify that this is not the case, it's just that there are some parts of this particular post that don't quite add up, in my eyes at least. I did ask that Jakkon's fleet isn't totally wrecked... (yes I know I said decimated in my actual post, I didn't know decimated meant 10%, but you got the general idea of what I was asking).