[quote=@ViolentViolet]
And that goes for anyone with an interest in critiquing my work. 
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I would love to read it over, but what kind of critiquing are you looking for?

And... here are some questions, since the OP doesn't have a ton to go by...
-Would it be possible for Catalina to have a car, albeit an old one?
-Is the group meeting all at once, already together, or a mix?
-Where is the group (state, region, country, etc)?

-Do you want me to make up some graphics for the RP?

I'll stay out of the advanced vs casual debate, except to say this: I STARTED rping in advanced, and have been at it for several years now. I am coming to this forum BECAUSE of the casual, as it's something that can be written relatively speedily (with quality, of course) yet still give me that rush from reading other posts, which will be coming faster due to the casual nature. Not that I am dropping advanced styled writing, this is just a nice relaxant. Like a chef making a sandwich instead of a three course meal.