[@Write] Yea, that is a really strange way to do the bio.

Being a detective (even if just a freelancer) isn't quite explained. It would be nice if you could add a small addendum to your backstory, explaining why they have that skill. Otherwise, it's good.

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All this talk about drinking on people's 21st.

My 21st birthday consisted of me playing a bad game with friends.

[sup][sup]however my 19th birthday was a teenager version of a 21st party[/sup][/sup]