[quote=@Bigg Slamm] [B]| NAME(S): |[/B] [INDENT]Anthony James Sweetwater​[/INDENT] [/quote] Okay so here's where I'm torn, your samples are really strong but I find the sheet rather weak. The powers especially are throwing me for a loop, for such a complex ability I feel like it could be extended and further limited and balanced. I'd also ask you to remove the part about being able to pilot anything or fire any gun. The ability to build a car for example does not mean one can drive it well, in fact quite often the mechanic and the racer are different people. Likewise building a perfectly balanced firearm may make it easier to use but doesn't necessarily make you a marksman. The backstory ends a little abruptly, especially since you have Anthony attending P.R.C.U. for approximately 12-14 years, his abilities developing at the age of 10 (About three/four years too young to attend P.R.C.U. I might add). I should note that for a male, ten years old is rather young to go through puberty. I mention puberty as this is explicitly linked to the development of a Hyperhuman's abilities. Since the school closed two years ago, it would be nice if there was something that explained what Anthony has been doing since. It seems that you did that under the 'Motivation/Objective' category but I feel like that didn't really explain the goal of that category clearly. So my current verdict is a 'No', but if you are able to bring the sheet up to what I'm looking for before I fill the other slots I will gladly re-evaluate it.