[quote=@GreenGrenade] [color=7ea7d8][B]| NAME: |[/B][/color] [color=darkgray][INDENT]Gareth Corrigan[/INDENT][/color][/quote] For the life of me I can't figure out what exactly about your sheet I'm struggling with. Some of it is my fault, like I really should have included more information about H.E.L.P. and H.I.T. on the OP because if the 'Mindjacker' really did attract H.I.T.'s attention he would have been shut down. H.I.T. had a very strict anti-Vigilante policy believing it reflected poorly on Hyperhumans to use their abilities to take the law into their own hands. That said I can't blame you for writing what you did as you couldn't possibly know lol. Honestly I think I just want to find flaws with your CS but I really can't. Truth be told I'm rather interested to see how he fits into the story as his motivation and objective makes him more of a liability to the Convoy than an asset. He's not looking to help anyone, he's not looking for peace, he just wants to stay alive and anonymous. So with that said, I suppose the only other thing I can say is accepted! Go ahead and throw him in the Character Tab.