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Okay, so, I would like to know more about why he forced her to kill innocents and if he saved her, why did she kill him? A little more depth and perspective into what was going on in Wylin's head would be appreciated. Also, some more description on the flaws would be nice and I'm not sure strength and endurance are skills. More like attributes. It's also sort of hard to read, so it would be appreciated if you spread it out more. In the future as well, many GMs would be grateful if you waited before posting in the Character Section.
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originally I had it noted that it needs work and you're definitely right. I posted in the char section on accident and I'm really sorry. It was just a bad idea to push to get it finished tonight because that's not my A game or the impression I want you to have of me, its late where I live and I should have just finished it tomorrow. The bio is probably going to have another paragraph I think so there will be more explanation. 

As of right now she's not well put together but I have all my ideas there, at least that's something.