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originally I had it noted that it needs work and you're definitely right. I posted in the char section on accident and I'm really sorry. It was just a bad idea to push to get it finished tonight because that's not my A game or the impression I want you to have of me, its late where I live and I should have just finished it tomorrow. The bio is probably going to have another paragraph I think so there will be more explanation. 

As of right now she's not well put together but I have all my ideas there, at least that's something.
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Hey man, it's all good. Finish her tomorrow, no rush.