Okay, here goes.

[@Minato Namikaze] I can't say I like this new direction. More effort was put into the CS, which I appreciate, but the character no longer really fits with the theme of the RP. Our characters in are meant to be powerful or influential figures in the Age of Dawn; Desmond is just some asshole kid. A reworked "Alucard" would have been preferable to the current incarnation of your character.

[@Kingfisher] Looks good to me!! I'll let you guys know when to post your characters in the appropriate tab. Some time tonight, most likely.

[@TheWizardLizard] Emily is A-OK. I suggested "Purity" due to her goal of "purifying" Borea of the Scourge, but I leave it up to you. A small thought I had would be that she kept her father's crossbow, but also acquired a fuck-huge blunderbuss or something similar as [u]her[/u] weapon, meant mostly for blowing huge chunks out of beastmen. Like I said, up to you, but I see no reason that she can't have both.

[@Flagg] The Witch King is acceptable! Don't see anything that strikes me as off or that could be better. I look forward to seeing him in action.

I'll be working on my own character sometime tonight. Though as painfully aware as I am of the pitfalls surround DMPCs, he'll mostly be a walking plot coupon for other characters.