[quote=@Bigg Slamm]
edits have also been made to my sheet here in the thread should anyone else like to peruse them.
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I'm no authority in this RP by any means, but I'd like to offer up my opinion on your powerset, if that's okay:

Personally, I feel you have a good character who is let down by a powerset that I just can't quite seem to get onboard with. One of the various beauties of the Vigilance universe is the 'realism' of powers that Wraith has worked on for a very long time. Every power is rooted in some sort of scientific understanding; of course none of it is 'real' since superpowers don't exist, but there's a lot of attention paid to [i]how[/i] various powers work, and [i]why[/i] they are able to pass as realistic within Vigilance's own rules of science and magic.

I feel like your approach to technomancy could use some work in this respect. It leaves a lot of questions unanswered to me: How do any of the machines he makes function? Where does the matter come from with which he is able to create components for his machines (via his mercury-like substance)? How does circuitry work? How does his brain (an organic construct), naturally know how to combine man-made components to create machines, without any technological or mechanical knowledge of his own?

I hope this doesn't feel like I'm ripping on you; and I do apologise if I'm speaking out of turn. I just feel like it would be a shame for this character (whom I otherwise really like) to be lumbered with what I feel is an inadequate powerset in comparison to the rest of the sheet - and, indeed, to the other powersets of the approved characters thus far.

Perhaps consider scaling his powers back considerably. I feel he should not be able to simply create machines from any old components. Combining a clock and a toaster is not likely to make a firearm, for example. I feel his powers should solely be rooted in the ability to repurpose and rearrange parts; and, indeed, combine various parts from different machines to create something better, or entirely new. I think the main issue for me, in my mind, is that he needs to have access to the components he requires in order to use them; creating them from nothing seems far-fetched in my opinion.

This doesn't render him useless; he can carry a wealth of parts with him that he knows might come in useful, and if he requires anything else he can pick it up during the stops in various cities. I also think his powers should involve some kind of extensive understanding of mechanical concepts; rather than simply 'knowing everything' about machines, he should be able to look at the components he has available and very swiftly be able to mentally piece together how he might turn them into something else.

I hope this helps, because I'd really like to see this character accepted. Of course, Wraith might disagree with me entirely, in which case I'm more than certain he'll take the opportunity to publicly shame me and send me back to my corner. But this was just how things were looking from my angle; I like to think if someone else had opinions like this about any of my own characters, they would make them known to me.