Ok. we know you decently by now, so we're not holding back criticism.

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[*]Are you sure you have capacity to manage another character as well as all your other RPs?[/*]
[*]If he was so heavily injured, considering Darth Nyiss' dislike of non-sith/non-humans, why would they even bother trying to heal him? Non-humanoids are seen as considerably less than humanoids, let alone humans or red Sith.[/*]
[*]Another gray Jedi? There seems to be a bit many gray Jedi now. Part of the purpose in this here RP is to explore the differences between Sith and Jedi and see what happens when they're pushed hard, not to play with the balance point between light and dark.
Turning someone already on the edge is no achievement for the Sith. A real achievement is to take someone pure light and turn them utterly to the dark side.[/*]
[*]You've been in this RP. You should be above the point where you try to skip out on the point about having prior relations to the other prisoners. Make up some, Sep. And don't do it half-heartedly.[/*]
[*]Another warrior into this non-combat based RP? what's the point? And what in the name of the Emperor was he doing away from the front lines?[/*]
[*]Expand your flaws. A single sentence is just sad.[/*]
[*][b]Four[/b] lightsaber styles? Again, what was he doing away from the front lines of the war? Such range of skill would've had him stuck there. Not anywhere close to the Coruscanti Jedi temple.[/*]
[*]Your reason for not having been seen before: Pathetically lacking in detail.[/*]
[*]His appearance: Why is he naked?[/*]
[*]Almost everything: Why? Why is it so? Explain. Just because he's large doesn't mke it impossible to be a good pilot. Four arms make up for that, and a ship can easily be built with an otherwise oversized cockpit. 
Why was he captured? How? When? Where?[/*]
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We could go on, but we're pretty sure you get the idea.