[quote=Xaxl]
I think it's a bit unfair for you to be critiquing his posts when you're not even technically involved in the RP.I could understand his post just fine.
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I'm sorry, but he does raise a very fair point, and your defence was a bit Ad Hominem. 
I hate to say it, but the grammar isn't exactly good in that post.
Which isn't to say that it was incomprehensible or unimaginative. It just could use a bit of work from a literary standpoint.

The way I see it, better to give constructive criticism and point it out than just ignore it. I was neither meant offensively nor as an insult. 
Just a tip to improve writing.