[@Mokley][@Archimedes][@Eodwyn Aether][@Tojin]Heh, thanks for the feedback dudes!  I've been thinking about this story way too much.  Then again, there are one hundred posts and IC hasn't even started yet, which means everyone else is thinking about it just as much.

Looking at the awesome map, I wonder how large Periphery is.  Is every line a simple two lane street, or a massive eight lane freeway?  I'd say with a queen as the ruler and with a huge flow of funding and goods required to constantly build up a wall, then the larger the better.  More like a nation-state than a regular city.  The four curves at each cardinal direction could be major support beams, maybe individual districts with their own governor or mayor that have micro-cites built around them.  Maybe slums?

[@Eodwyn Aether] mentioned the queen's palace in the center, which I think makes perfect sense.  It would probably be the tallest building in the city as well.  And, uh, tha shits in the inner circle!  Yes.  Upper class housing towers, financial district, entertainment district, government services, etc.

[quote=@MsChimeric]
If some Grit can pass for human, have any already infiltrated Periphery I wonder...[/quote]

Now this is an interesting thought.  And if they have, how far up the societal ladder could they be?  Hm...

Today is one of my working weekends and I'm looking at the clock and I realize I was supposed to start getting ready twenty minutes ago.  I'm sure I'll be thinking about this all day again.