[@Tojin] Uh, your post is not exactly four lines in length which is half a paragraph. Casual posts usually are required to be at least four lines in length at least. Not trying to be mean or anything just letting you know the standards for Casual.

Also that post is just dialogue. We don't know what your character is doing or what their actions are so it's really hard for others to construct posts with such little information to go on.