[quote=YipeeXD]
I think the plot sounds fine. but it'll lose interest from us lot really fast. It basically says that Eliza and Acacia are the main characters and the rest of us dont mean anything.
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I think Ex intended it to be a subplot when he wrote it, to be honest.

There would have to be changes for it to encompass the entire school body and faculty, but when it deals with the school, in general, that should be fairly easy to accomplish. Imo.