[@Lugia] Basically yes, the lines are the only problem I have with it. 

- I get that Ember is a girls name and Vulpix is usually taken as a female because of it's looks, but Kel doesn't have that kind of adult parental attitude about him. If anything he would have called him something like "Kid". 

- Also, Keldeo is still a decently large Pokemon, how big was that well? If it was a school yard it could have been something like a small pond or area for the water type pokemon.