[quote=@FacePunch] [@The Kid Lantern] I was skeptical when I first looked over the sheet. Some of the changes seemed unnecessary. But when I read the sample post, you sold me on the concept. I like it. [/quote] I actually lived in Sheepshead Bay with some family, and being from a more southern state it was easy putting a VA native like Boom Boom in there. The U shaped building, the mostly Russian families, living across the Bay from a community college, and even trying to get a book deal was my life about a decade or so back. The changes I made to Northstar were mostly to make him more like myself. The part about him being a skier is also easy to write now with a close friend having moved out west to Colorado working in the kitchen at a ski resort. Separating Northstar and his sister was also something that wrote itself, but I wanted her to be his inspiration. I had a couple things I wanted to change for me, and then a couple things were used from his history in the comics, and everything else just poured out of me as I wrote it. [quote=@FacePunch] You ninja'd me! Oh, and definitely. Wolverine'll love that. I might even have him gravitate toward Washington when he's out of SHIELD custody. [/quote] I figured if Alpha Flight tried showing up [if we took the fight across the boarder in the woodland areas] Wolverine might get to make a few jokes at Puck's expense. Wasn't sure if you were gonna have them as part of Logan's past, so I went with fighting a pack of Wendigos rather than the team itself. I didn't want to present them as being assholes if I didn't have to LOL ~KL~