[quote=@Lugubrious]
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I'm very happy that you're lucid about this issue.  Thank you for the concessions.  I saw that he was meant to be a Power Fantasy sort of character, but his weapon alone is enough to evoke that.  It's be more obviously tongue-in-cheek if he behaved with less intensity IC.  I'd honestly be more happy if you were to say that he has a very low amount of aura because of his body, the vast majority of which is robotic.  He'd become vulnerable to damage pretty quickly, but afterward he still has his armor and beneath it, he is parts after all.  Then Gren has an obvious and even unintuitive weakness: the walking tank is vulnerable to burst damage.

[b]@Everyone:[/b] I've been to a greater or lesser degree of consciousness been wanting to ask this for some time: how do all of you feel about going back and amending the original character sheet with a History section?  I must admit, the sheet I used for this RP I took directly from the last one, which I'm certain didn't have one either.  We would all be able to write down our characters' histories if we so chose, and add them to our CSes.
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No objection but there wouldn't really be too much for Shiro's 'history'.