[@Mortarion], I'm sure you're pretty good with the grammar and everything, but that post seems a little rushed. You should tidy it up, lots of run-on sentences and places where you should've put periods and whatnot. I understand you were rushing to get Tsleeixth up to speed, but try to slow it down a bit lest the quality of the post is sacrificed.

A quick tip? You could've cold-opened in the battle, or the very start of it, and left the night's events and his arrival just an afterthought instead of scrambling to address everywhere Tsee's been.

Also, try to slow Tsee down a bit. Jorwen has trouble taking these things down and he's a tower of a man. Tsee puts himself one-on-one with a Kamal and it crushes his hand and punches him in the ribs. If it had landed a blow like that, Tsee would surely be dead, having the wind knocked out of him and stunned by the impact. I illustrated this when White-Eye took a couple punches to his body and he's pretty dead. You would do better to have some of the mercenaries with Tsee overwhelming the Kamal with his help instead of 1v1. Even Jorwen hasn't managed to kill one single-handedly, he'd have been dead without White-Eye's sacrifice and the only reason Sadri killed one by his lonesome was because it was pretty distracted and panicked, unaware of its surroundings.